Wow - I didn't realize how difficult listening to others talk about my writing could be. I get so nervous but this is a great process. LLS
HSTeech wrote:
Welcome to the forums, LStein. You have given us a great deal to think about here. You bring up some ideas that do bear some focused thought!
I am also a teacher, and I understand where these feelings are coming from. Parents are no doubt the most miserable part of my job! (Followed by a close second: administration!)
This rant is not quite prose, and not quite poetry. As a performance piece that may work pretty well. (You might consider having this moved to the Page and Stage forum) However, I don't feel like it sustains the audience's attention. I would suggest making into two poems, which may even be companion pieces, but separate.
why the ellipses in the end lines?
Lots of totally legitimate ideas in there, LStein. I look forward to seeing what becomes of this piece! Teech
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